Julia, I like how you use a lot of end rhyme, it seemed to fit and connect as though it were a puzzle. I loved how you explain all the effects of marijuana and how it can ruin your life. You used a lot of imagery which helped me to see what was going on throughout the poem, I liked that! You did an awesome job!
I really liked your poem! It was great! I loved how it told a story from how the guy was explaining how it ruins your life. It was wonderful. It was great how he described how it ruined his life. Great job!
Julia, I like how you use a lot of end rhyme, it seemed to fit and connect as though it were a puzzle. I loved how you explain all the effects of marijuana and how it can ruin your life. You used a lot of imagery which helped me to see what was going on throughout the poem, I liked that! You did an awesome job!
ReplyDeleteI really liked your poem! It was great! I loved how it told a story from how the guy was explaining how it ruins your life. It was wonderful. It was great how he described how it ruined his life. Great job!
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